September Q&A

Q. Is it ever correct to use “roadtrip” versus “road trip”?

A. If you write roadtrip as one word because that’s simply what you prefer, then you can establish that as your style through repetition of the word. But unless you’re writing poetry or fiction, you’re probably better off choosing the form that readers will expect.

As a simple n-gram will show, two-word road trip is many times more common than one-word roadtrip in published books. Most dictionaries don’t even record roadtrip. Wiktionary, which had more than 1.3 million entries for English terms as of August 1, 2026, is an exception. (For that number, see Wiktionary’s “Statistics” page, under English. That doesn’t count the many terms from other languages that are defined in English-language Wiktionary, including the German Roadtrip, borrowed from English but spelled as one word and, because it’s a noun, capitalized.)

As for whether the one-word form is “correct” (in English, that is), there’s no law that dictates how compounds are formed; whether any two words remain open or closed depends on common usage and may change over time, as in the case of to day > to-day > today (see the entry for today at OED.com). But if you’re planning on road-tripping, you should probably pack some extra hyphens.

See also CMOS 7.89 (on the trend toward closed compounds) and 11.42 (on German capitalization).

Q. Hi, CMOS editors: Would you hyphenate “five times” in “a five times increase”? And if so, would it be “five-times” or “five-time”?

A. We would write “a fivefold increase,” assuming you mean to say that something has grown by a factor of five (e.g., increasing from 10 to 50). And though you could say instead that this same thing grew to five times the original amount, “five times” isn’t normally used as a modifier in the way that “fivefold” is; “five-time increase” won’t work either, unless you mean that something increased on five separate occasions (which says nothing about how much it increased overall).

Another thing to keep in mind: A fivefold increase is 500 percent of the original, but it’s only a 400 percent increase, not a 500 percent increase. For example, 50 is 500 percent of 10 (or five times as much), but that’s an increase of only 40, which is 400 percent of the original 10.

See also CMOS 7.96, section 3, under “fold.”

Q. When using a preceding -ly adverb to modify an adjective, it typically pains me to use an open form (no hyphenation). But I bite the bullet, follow CMOS, and eliminate the hyphen. Yet when there are two essentially equivalent formulations where one adverb is an -ly adverb and the other is not, I’m perplexed as to the logic. For instance: She had a nearly encyclopedic knowledge of baseball statistics versus She had an almost-encyclopedic knowledge of baseball statistics. Can you provide any insights? Thank you.

A. Okay, so you have a deeply-rooted dislike—as Jane Austen’s publisher styled that phrase in the 1813 first edition of Pride and Prejudice, vol. 2, p. 124—for the modern rule that says that you should write deeply rooted dislike (as covered in CMOS 7.96, section 2, under “adverb ending in ‑ly + participle or adjective”). We’re not offended. The idea that readers will expect an adjective rather than a noun after a word like deeply and thus don’t need any help from a hyphen could easily be turned on its head. You could argue instead that the adverb and participle clearly belong together and should go ahead and tie the knot (with a hyphen).

But if you do follow Chicago style, don’t worry about being inconsistent in the examples you cite. Our editors would tend to leave the compound modifiers in both of your sentences open: a nearly encyclopedic knowledge and an almost encyclopedic knowledge. See CMOS 7.96, section 2, but this time under “adverb not ending in ‑ly + participle or adjective,” which notes that “certain compounds, including those with more, most, less, least, and very, can usually be left open unless ambiguity threatens.”

As one of the examples in that category suggests (“a rather boring play”), you can extend this exception to other adverbs of degree, including not only rather but also almost.

We’ll make a note to consider clarifying this in a future edition of CMOS. It’s less likely, however, that we’ll be revising our rules to be more in line with nineteenth-century hyphenation conventions.

Q. I am working with some marketing copy for the back cover of a book that has a three-word title with a period after each word. To my reading, it looks awkward in body copy to include all these periods. I might suggest using commas instead of periods to convey there isn’t a full stop at the end of each word. Does this sound reasonable to you?

A. That sounds reasonable, though it could depend on your title. Let’s say that your book has the following title on its cover and title page:

Lather.
Rinse.
Repeat.

Referring to Lather, Rinse, Repeat in the text would keep readers from stumbling while retaining the sense of the title. But let’s say a different (also hypothetical) book had this on its cover and title page:

I.
Don’t.
Care.

Referring to that title as I, Don’t, Care rather than I. Don’t. Care. would ruin the staccato effect of those periods. It would be better, in that case, to embrace the spirit of that title and defy convention.

Q. I’m having trouble finding guidance in CMOS about the minimum length of the final line of a paragraph (anywhere on the page). When proofreading, how do we determine whether a line is too short (or a “runt”)? I learned that it’s four characters minimum, but I can’t find CMOS confirmation of that. And then can an ellipsis be on a line on its own, and if not, should copyeditors use a nonbreaking space before a paragraph-ending ellipsis? What if there’s a closing quotation mark after it? Thanks!

A. According to CMOS 2.121 (on proofreading for overall appearance), “The last word in any paragraph must not be hyphenated unless at least four letters (in addition to any punctuation) are carried over to the final line.” You can extend this to mean that a paragraph-ending word on its own line should ideally be at least four letters long. But whatever your definition of what constitutes a “runt line,” it’s mostly a matter of taste (and applies only to print and other fixed layouts). Some publishers set a minimum of three letters; others go with as many as five. If in doubt, proofreaders should ask before starting in on the text.

As for ellipses, a paragraph-ending ellipsis on a line by itself, even if it’s followed by a quotation mark, is best avoided if you’re following a four-letter-plus-punctuation minimum (you can ignore the spaces between the dots and count the ellipsis as equivalent to a three-letter word). It’s probably best avoided anyway so it’s not mistaken for a section break.

Copyeditors, however, don’t usually decide such things. Though it’s generally a good idea to insert nonbreaking spaces within your ellipses to keep them from breaking at the end of a line as you edit (which can be annoying for you and anyone who reviews the document), you can usually leave decisions about paragraph endings to the typesetter or whoever will be preparing the document for publication.

See also CMOS 12.59–69 (on ellipses).

Q. A magazine article I want to cite lists the issue’s date as December 25 through January 7, 1973. How should I go about citing this, and where should I place the year considering it starts in 1972 but ends in 1973?

A. That sounds like a double issue. You didn’t specify the magazine, so let’s cite something that appeared in the last printed edition of The New Yorker from 2025. The date on that cover is recorded as “DEC. 29, 2025 & JAN. 5, 2026.” Here’s how we’d cite an article from that issue:

1. Alex Abramovich, “Last Highway: How Willie Nelson Sees America,” Profiles, New Yorker, Dec. 29, 2025, and Jan. 5, 2026 (double issue).

You don’t have to clarify that it’s a double issue, but it can’t hurt to do so. And though we’ve abbreviated the months, that’s also optional; if you do it for one citation, however, do it for all (see also CMOS 10.44).

Finally, some articles, like the one above, may have been published online. If so, use the info for that version to cite it:

1. Alex Abramovich, “How Willie Nelson Sees America,” Profiles, New Yorker, Dec. 22, 2025, https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2025/12/29/willie-nelson-profile.

That version includes the following statement at the end of the article (in italics):

Published in the print edition of the December 29, 2025 & January 5, 2026, issue, with the headline “Last Highway.”

But you don’t have to include that in your citation.